Dear Sophie,
My verses usually center on the single theme - Love. So I thought I'd write something different for once. And I came up with this. Hope you like it :)
Love from,
Nivix.
A lovely Lass is what you are,
Radiant like the face of a happy bride...
Who might your groom be.
The migrating birds or the wispy clouds...
But suddenly....
Cloudy is your countenance,
Like the eyes of a melancholy maiden...
What pain hath fallen on you,
To cry like a distressed damsel...
Your tears lighting up people's eyes,
And refreshing the Mother Earth ...
its a nice try :) keep goin on.. who is that lass?
ReplyDeleteLass here is the "SKY" dearie... :)
ReplyDeleteYou can get the hint in the last two lines :)